15.2.08

It is strange: Ajeeb baat hai

Ajeeb baat hai

Ajeeb baat hai
Ke kuchch bhi ajeeb nahin
Bhatakte hue khwaabon ki
Haqeeqat yaheen
Aapki manzil mere raaste mein hai
Ajeeb baat hai
Main uss raaste par nahin
Phir bhi aahat dheemi-si takrati hai
Rooh ke darwaaze par
Aur kamre mein
Aapke anjuman ki khushboo phailti hai
Ajeeb baat hai
Ke kuchch bhi ajeeb nahin
Aap kaheen par nahin
Aap hai yaheen

~FV

5 comments:

Manzoor said...

Farzana... I generally get perplexed with your cryptic poetry, This was simple, neat and it touched me

Pune S said...

FV:

Superb! It is simple and yet very powerful. It is also easy to comprehend for lesser-educated patrons, self included.

Seriously, how the hell do you create such wonderful verses? Is it an outcome of your experiences; or a result of emotional makeup; or purely a cogitative process; an epiphany? Or a mix of all this. Or something else altogether.

FV said...

Manzoor:

I thought my cryptic stuff soon becomes easy to fathom...but thanks...

PS:

Kind of you. I don't have answers. This one has been partially answered in the new post, but yet...I anyway think your query is hypothetical and not looking for a specific response.

Shadowed Meanings said...

WOW!!!!
:)
:)

FV said...

SM:

Thanks for the smiles...

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